Why Some Books Only Work in the First Person

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Why Some Books Only Work in the First Person

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Christian Wiedeck, M.Sc.

The Prisoner of My Own Mind

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The Prisoner of My Own Mind (image credits: wikimedia)

There’s something unsettling about reading a book where you realize the narrator might be lying to you. It’s like discovering your trusted friend has been keeping secrets all along. Recent research shows that narrative transportation—how stories shape our worldview—has substantially increased scientific interest, and studies suggest that situation model construction may be influenced by a reader’s ability to embody the first-person perspective of the protagonist. This psychological intimacy creates a unique bond between reader and character that simply can’t exist in third person. When Humbert Humbert in Nabokov’s “Lolita” whispers his disturbing confessions directly into our ears, we become complicit in a way that would be impossible if someone else were telling his story. The rawness of Holden Caulfield’s voice in “Catcher in the Rye” hits differently because it feels like he’s sitting across from you at 2 AM, spilling his heart out over coffee that’s gone cold.

The Art of Deception

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The Art of Deception (image credits: flickr)

Unreliable narrators are the magicians of literature, and their trick only works when performed in first person. While unreliable narrators are almost by definition first-person narrators, the term “unreliable narrator” was coined by Wayne C. Booth in his 1961 book The Rhetoric of Fiction. Gone Girl’s Amy Dunne doesn’t just tell us lies—she makes us believe them so completely that when the truth finally surfaces, we feel personally betrayed. Gone Girl by Gillian Flynn contains one of the most famous unreliable narrators of the last decade: Amy Dunne, where at the midpoint twist, we find out that Amy is not only alive but has been meticulously writing a retrospective diary to frame her husband for her murder. The power comes from the intimate “I” that makes us trust when we shouldn’t. In third person, we’d maintain some distance, some skepticism. But first person breaks down our defenses, making the eventual revelation feel like a punch to the gut.

Letters from the Heart

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Letters from the Heart (image credits: unsplash)

Some stories demand to be whispered through diary pages and letter exchanges because their very structure depends on it. The epistolary form can be seen as adding greater realism to a story, due to the text existing diegetically within the lives of the characters. Bram Stoker’s “Dracula” wouldn’t be nearly as chilling if told by an omniscient narrator—instead, Bram Stoker released one of the most widely recognized and successful novels in the epistolary form to date, Dracula, compiled entirely of letters, diary entries, newspaper clippings, telegrams, doctor’s notes, ship’s logs, and the like. The fragmented nature of these personal documents makes the supernatural feel uncomfortably real. In our hyperconnected world, the intimacy of personal correspondence still strikes a chord, as modern epistolary novels tap into our voyeuristic tendencies while reflecting the fragmented, rapid-fire way we consume information. Helen Fielding’s “Bridget Jones’s Diary” works because we’re reading her most private thoughts, complete with calorie counting and relationship disasters that feel authentically embarrassing.

When Character Is Everything

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When Character Is Everything (image credits: flickr)

Sometimes the narrator’s voice isn’t just telling the story—it IS the story. Sylvia Plath’s “The Bell Jar” loses its devastating impact without Esther Greenwood’s internal monologue because her depression can only be truly understood from the inside. A first-person narrative can raise the emotional stakes because the narrator is living the action of the story, making an empathetic reader more invested than they might be with a more detached narrator. Eleanor Oliphant’s social awkwardness in Gail Honeyman’s novel becomes painfully relatable precisely because we’re trapped inside her head, experiencing every cringe-worthy moment from her perspective. These characters don’t just have unique voices—their voices are their defining characteristics, and without first person, they’d become case studies rather than people we can understand and empathize with.

Secrets We Tell Only to Ourselves

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Secrets We Tell Only to Ourselves (image credits: flickr)

There’s a confessional quality to certain stories that demands the intimacy of “I.” Stephen Chbosky’s “The Perks of Being a Wallflower” feels like reading someone’s therapy journal, and that’s exactly the point. The Perks of Being a Wallflower by Stephen Chbosky captures the essence of teen angst through a series of letters, feeling like reading someone’s diary, but with permission. Charlie’s letters to his anonymous friend create a safe space where he can reveal his deepest fears and darkest secrets. Donna Tartt’s “The Secret History” works as Richard’s retrospective confession, a man looking back on events that changed him forever. The weight of guilt and the need to unburden oneself can only be properly conveyed when the confessor speaks directly to us. In third person, these would become stories about people with secrets; in first person, they become the secrets themselves.

The Stream of Broken Thoughts

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The Stream of Broken Thoughts (image credits: flickr)

Some narratives attempt to capture the chaotic flow of human consciousness, and this psychological realism can only work in first person. William Faulkner’s “The Sound and the Fury” plunges us directly into Benjy’s fragmented mind, where time isn’t linear and thoughts tumble over each other without logic. Virginia Woolf’s exploration of consciousness in “Mrs. Dalloway” relies heavily on internal monologues that feel like overhearing someone’s thoughts. Stream-of-Consciousness attempts to get down on paper the ebb and flow of thoughts, feeling, impulses, memories, and perceptions/interpretations that go on in each of our minds continuously during our waking hours. These aren’t just stylistic choices—they’re attempts to represent the actual experience of being human, complete with contradictions, interruptions, and the messy reality of how our minds actually work.

The Observer Who Becomes the Story

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The Observer Who Becomes the Story (image credits: wikimedia)

Sometimes first person works not because the narrator is the main character, but because their perspective becomes crucial to understanding the real protagonist. Nick Carraway in “The Great Gatsby” isn’t just telling Jay Gatsby’s story—he’s filtering it through his own moral lens, his own prejudices and blind spots. There is significant scholarly debate about whether or not Nick Carraway is, in fact, an unreliable narrator, since he is largely a documentor of the story’s insane events, but not a participant in them himself, we are at the mercy of Nick’s biases and moral interpretations. One argument for Nick’s unreliability is his preferential treatment towards Gatsby. Dr. Watson’s friendship with Sherlock Holmes colors how we see the detective—he’s not just reporting facts, he’s sharing his admiration and occasional frustration with his brilliant but difficult friend. These observer-narrators become characters in their own right, and their personal investment in the story makes it more compelling than any neutral third-person account could be.

The Power of Limited Vision

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The Power of Limited Vision (image credits: flickr)

First person creates natural blind spots that generate suspense and mystery in ways third person narration simply can’t match. We can only know what our narrator knows, see what they see, understand what they understand. This limitation becomes a feature, not a bug, especially in psychological thrillers and mysteries. When we’re trapped inside one person’s head, we miss crucial details, misinterpret situations, and fall for the same deceptions that fool our narrator. This study examined the effect of narrative point-of-view and readers’ own prior personal experience on reading engagement and comprehension. The reader becomes detective, constantly trying to read between the lines and figure out what’s really happening based on incomplete information.

When Madness Takes the Wheel

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When Madness Takes the Wheel (image credits: wikimedia)

Mental illness, trauma, and psychological breakdown can only be truly conveyed from the inside. The madman is unreliable because they are mentally detached from reality. In Bret Easton Ellis’ American Psycho, Patrick Bateman is a self-proclaimed serial killer—or is he? The Wall Street investment banker narrates his killing spree until it’s revealed that one of his supposed victims is alive and well, forcing the reader to question Bateman’s story. Chuck Palahniuk’s “Fight Club” narrator doesn’t just have dissociative identity disorder—we experience it alongside him, slowly realizing that Tyler Durden isn’t who we thought he was. These stories require us to experience mental states that are impossible to understand from the outside. Third person would turn these characters into clinical subjects; first person makes them human beings worthy of our empathy, even when their actions are inexcusable.

Growing Up in Real Time

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Growing Up in Real Time (image credits: wikimedia)

Coming-of-age stories often work best in first person because we get to experience the protagonist’s growth as it happens, complete with all the false starts, misunderstandings, and gradual dawning of awareness that characterize real adolescence. They are ideal vehicles for telling coming-of-age stories, because the protagonists are allowed to work out their growing up years without outside input. Scout Finch in “To Kill a Mockingbird” tells her story from an adult perspective, but we see events through her child’s eyes, creating a unique double vision that captures both innocence and understanding. Mark Haddon’s “The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time” works because fifteen-year-old Christopher’s autism affects how he processes and describes the world around him. His literal, logical narration reveals truths about the adults in his life that a more sophisticated narrator might hide or rationalize.

The Intimacy of Shared Secrets

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The Intimacy of Shared Secrets (image credits: wikimedia)

First person creates an illusion of intimacy that makes readers feel like confidants rather than observers. When I open the pages of an epistolary novel, I feel as though I’m being let in on a good secret. It’s like getting to read over the character’s shoulder while they take note of what happened that day. We’re not just reading about someone’s life—we’re being trusted with their deepest thoughts, their embarrassing moments, their private fears and secret hopes. This false intimacy is actually a sophisticated literary technique that makes us more invested in the outcome because we feel personally connected to the narrator. Reading an epistolary novel feels like eavesdropping. Like being somewhere you shouldn’t. It can thrill you even as it manipulates your sympathies. The “I” voice breaks down the fourth wall between reader and character in a way that creates genuine emotional investment.

When Voice Becomes Identity

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When Voice Becomes Identity (image credits: wikimedia)

Some books exist primarily as showcases for a particular narrative voice, where the how of telling becomes as important as the what being told. These are stories where the character’s way of speaking, thinking, and seeing the world is so distinctive that changing to third person would fundamentally alter the work. First-person is great for generating immediacy, and it easily brings the reader into the subjective experience of the narrator. Irvine Welsh’s “Trainspotting” captures the rhythm and vocabulary of Edinburgh street life in a way that would be impossible in standard third person narration. The voice isn’t just delivering information—it’s creating atmosphere, establishing credibility, and immersing us in a world we might never otherwise understand. These narrators aren’t just telling their stories; they’re performing them, and we’re their captive audience.

The Future of First Person

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The Future of First Person (image credits: flickr)

Despite being most closely associated with the 18th century, the number of epistolary novels published in the new millennium exceeds those published in any other era. Granted, there is a correlation between these numbers and the proliferation of technology/democratization of art, but still, the format persists. Modern technology has actually expanded the possibilities for first-person narration rather than limiting them. Stories told through text messages, emails, social media posts, and even dating app conversations are finding new ways to create that intimate connection between narrator and reader. The resurgence of epistolary novels in the digital age isn’t just a comeback; it’s a full-blown revolution. Authors are seizing the opportunity to tell stories through the very mediums we use to communicate every day. The future of first-person narration lies not just in traditional diary entries and letters, but in capturing the fragmented, multi-platform way we actually communicate and experience our lives in the digital age.

First person isn’t just a stylistic choice—it’s often the only way certain stories can be told authentically. Whether through psychological intimacy, unreliable narration, or the confessional quality of personal documents, these techniques create connections between reader and character that would be impossible in third person. The magic happens when we stop reading about someone and start experiencing life through their eyes, complete with all the limitations, biases, and blind spots that make us human. What story could you tell that would only work in your own voice?

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